Sexual-Lobster, delivering great animation as always. Amazing nonsense, which made me giggle. Though I would have liked if there was some sort of warning for the last bit (like some content warning or something), but otherwise ok animation. c:
You guys always make the best shorts. ALL MY FIVES R BELONG TO YOU.
But yeah, actually reviewing this: I love it. The animation quality is always so incredibly fluid and awesome and even when you're just using tweens it is barely noticeable.
Again, all my 5's are belong to this.
That you for creating such great work.
When he started flying I went "Holy shit that's really good movement."
The rest of my review would essentially be a copy of Scampers' one.
I actually quite liked it. It has a potential for improvement (voice acting, drawings, animation, so on), but I quite liked it. When Odahviing landed, you could for example have added a little bounce to his landing (you know, how you slightly bend your knees when landing after a jump).
The voices sounded like they were recorded on a laptop microphone. Which they probably were. Also, the female voice seemed to have been chipmunked (i.e: the pitch was set high), and that will be very annoying, unless you manage to work it into your animation cleverly.
Also, I need something to base my critique on, so; How old are you and how long have you been working with flash? Because you show much promise, at the very least in writing stuff like this. You just have to improve your flash skills.
But anyway, this was fun to watch. I'll look forward to see what you will be making.... in the FUTURE.
yes I realise that he is abit stiff when he lands. I am not a very good voice actor either. I am getting more use to it though. but still got my cheap microphone. lol I am in my mid thirties so I am a late starter. still I have been told that drawing is something you always improve on all your life so I hope to get better even though I am a late starter. thanx for the lovely comment buddy :)
Humor was good. Animation was fantastic.
The humor was good. I laughed inside at several points.
But what really god me was the animation quality. You really know how to make birds move. And make 'em move well. 9/10 stars. Keep up the awesome work!
What is your definition of soon?
"I'll delete this soon." It's been a few years now. Deleting it yet?
I have nothing better to do.
So I got the achievement. And then the second achievement. And then THE THIRD ACHIEVEMENT OH GOD I HAVE NO LIFE.
To be honest.
While I would 5 and 10 this, there is one factor bringing it down: No real story. Every part is a loop. A very creative loop, I must say. the Frame-by-frame animation in the bottom one is meh (didn't really care for that loop, even though it made me giggle a bit).
The choice of music was fantastic: It made this piece of flash feel very much artistic indeed, and when combined with the fact that it was just a collection of random creative loops it made it even more pleasing. Especially if one sits watching the crow one. One just feels like one's sitting on the boat enjoying a pleasant afternoon.
8/10 from me. Good work. Good work.
Incredibly creative, I have to say.
Just looking at the diversity of the results from this project, one can see how incredibly genious this collab really is.
By the way, is it possible to download the menu song/collab theme? :D Just feeling like having it as the cellphone tone for messages.
This is quite original, I'll say.
I don't really have the imagination to write a long review on this one, (as I've seen a lot of my fellow newgrounders seem to lack too), But I'll have to say that this series seem incredibly ingenious. I especially loved the fact that God was sent to jail for touching a kid, when he actually was in heaving at a gay rave party. I know a good deal of my friends will love this. (especially the ones that are either gay, or christian, or both).
8/10 for good animation, good story, good jokes.
The other 2 stars will be given if this manages to grow into a full-blown series.
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