HammerGod's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[skyrim parody]

I actually quite liked it. It has a potential for improvement (voice acting, drawings, animation, so on), but I quite liked it. When Odahviing landed, you could for example have added a little bounce to his landing (you know, how you slightly bend your knees when landing after a jump).

The voices sounded like they were recorded on a laptop microphone. Which they probably were. Also, the female voice seemed to have been chipmunked (i.e: the pitch was set high), and that will be very annoying, unless you manage to work it into your animation cleverly.

Also, I need something to base my critique on, so; How old are you and how long have you been working with flash? Because you show much promise, at the very least in writing stuff like this. You just have to improve your flash skills.

But anyway, this was fun to watch. I'll look forward to see what you will be making.... in the FUTURE.

littlegoblet responds:

yes I realise that he is abit stiff when he lands. I am not a very good voice actor either. I am getting more use to it though. but still got my cheap microphone. lol I am in my mid thirties so I am a late starter. still I have been told that drawing is something you always improve on all your life so I hope to get better even though I am a late starter. thanx for the lovely comment buddy :)

[runSACKrun]

Simple and fun

I find the use of the music here quite nice. The animation itself is simple (nothing too complex, mostly tweens it seems, some fbf) giving it a slightly fun feeling as it is a movie about how a bag of flour escapes a bakery.

In some ways I feel the animation could be better. But then, my own skills aren't that much better, so I don't really have a say in this.

I have no idea what grade you got on this, but I guess it would be a pleasant one. Giving this a 7/10, as I like my 10's to feel special.

Blakant responds:

most of the animation is fbf, it does haf some tweening, mostly only in moving the camera n all....

[LL-Stranded]

LOL....

Fiven =D. Good graphics Courgette. Bananas fruity fart savet the day again :D

CourgetteClock responds:

yes it does =D

[LL-Cat's Birthday]

Please reply on this...

Wow, Wonchop, this one was great! If i didn't know better i would fill this review full of lollollollol etc.

But question: are you finished with the 'Rewrite' collab?

I'm trying to check in the LL but it doesn't load.

Wonchop responds:

The Rewrite collab has 4 parts left to complete. With exams starting to end it shouldn't take too much longer.

[LL - Garlic's Lock Day]

WTF?...

though i love lock movies i say this might get blammed. tips:
more animation( u don't like waiting for ten hours to realize the movie is just a second long). thats it , i'll let the other NG users control this.

Alukhard responds:

I made something wrong while submitting this, but that's fixed now. Try watching it again.